Exposition
I disagree that children should eat a whole lot of lollies a day because it rots your teeth.
Firstly the sugar is bad for your teeth and you will have to go to the dentist.
Secondly your parents will waste a lot of money on your teeth.
Thirdly you will have to get braces.
NZ children should eat healthy food because it gives them more energy.
Matthew
Exposition
I disagree that every child should have lollies because you will be unhealthy.
Firstly your teeth will rot because you will be eating too many lollies.
Secondly you will get fat.
Thirdly you will get cancer.
Finally you will get bankrupt because you will go the dentist many times.
That’s why New Zealand people should not eat lollies every day.
Tom
Exposition
I disagree children should have lollies every day because you will get fat because of the sugar.
Firstly your teeth will rot and your parents will have to pay to take you to the dentist.
Secondly your teeth will get holes in your teeth and the dental nurse will have you drill your teeth out.
Thirdly it would be a waste of money because all you do is eat it. You might come across something you really like but you would not have enough money to buy it.
Finally you would go hyper because of the sugar.
All NZ children could die because they would get full of sugar.
Josh
Exposition
I disagree that children should be able to eat lollies every day because they would have to brush their teeth more.
Firstly the candy store would run out of sugar and candy.
Secondly the dentist is not always open.
Thirdly children will not have enough pocket money if they come across something that they want.
Finally if they have too much sugar they will become ill.
So Parents, don’t let your kids have lollies every day.
Dominic
Exposition
I disagree that children should not eat lollies every day because my Parents would have to pay money for my fillings.
Firstly your mum and dad would have to pay lots of money.
Secondly it will make your teeth rotten. I know that you can buy toothpaste but your parents still have to pay for that!
Thirdly it will make you fat and unhealthy.
Finally they have to pay for the lollies.
You should eat healthy food.
Christopher
Exposition
I absolutely disagree because if children eat lollies and chocolate every day your teeth will rot so much and if that happens you are making it expensive for your parents.
Firstly your teeth will rot so much that you might have to go to the dentist every day.
Secondly you will get so fat, that you will regret it so much, that you will say, “Why did I eat this much lollies and chocolate?”
Finally if you are eating lollies and chocolate every day, then you are not keeping the world healthy because if you are eating chocolate and lollies every day your sugar level will get high and you might die.
Sahil
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